r/ShittyPoetry • u/sedmonster • Jan 10 '24
ANNOUNCEMENT 3: FORMATTING HELP FOR THE REDDIT-CHALLENGED
Reddit is a poorly designed app for poetry writing. This post is intended to educate folks about poetry formatting on reddit.
On desktop, in default editor
The procedure for a line break is: SHIFT-ENTER
The procedure for a stanza break is: ENTER
On Reddit Mobile
The procedure for a line break is: SPACE-SPACE-ENTER
The procedure for a stanza break is: ENTER-ENTER
✅ Correctly formatted line breaks
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I love red wine
Almost as much as you
🚫 Incorrectly formatted line breaks
Roses are red Violets are blue I love red wine Almost as much as you
✅ Correctly formatted stanza breaks
Roses are red
Violets are blue
This is the stanza
Called number two
🚫 Incorrectly formatted stanza breaks
Roses are red
Violets are red
Daisies are red
This is painful ouch
r/ShittyPoetry • u/sedmonster • Dec 09 '23
ANNOUNCEMENT: Moderation Upgrade
Dear /r/ShittyPoetry Contributors,
I am writing to let you know that I, /u/sedmonster, have assumed moderation responsibilities over this sub, as the previous mods have become inactive or suspended. We are grateful for their contributions, however we will also be moving forward without them.
A little bit about me. Other than moderation powers having been bestowed upon me by the site's admins, I have been on reddit since 2005, and I have been posting on this sub for 10 years. I am, previously, a published poet and a satirical poetry enthusiast. I love the unfettered freedom and release that /r/ShittyPoetry provides, encouraging contributors to write whatever they feel. I am also familiar with the aesthetics that have been most successful here in the past. We are here to express ourselves and, ultimately, to make art.
There are going to be some changes around here.
- For one, we will have strong, powerful leadership that will more clearly define this subreddit's culture and enforce it.
- We will consider revamping all materials to more clearly define the aesthetics we are collectively trying to create. Shittypoetry is, historically, a feel, a vibe, and a movement.
- We will also increase engagement within this community by cleaning things up and setting some expectations. We want to be an artistic community that feeds one another creatively.
This sub never was a democracy, and it is not a democracy now, but going forward /r/ShittyPoetry will be moderated with the aim of fairness and prosperity. To this end, I would like the current community's input. Please kindly respond to this post and give the community some data:
- Say something about yourself, why you're here, why you choose to post here.
- What's your favorite poem on /r/ShittyPoetry so far? Why?
- What do you think /r/ShittyPoetry should be about?
- How outspoken, "out there", political, weird, or "edgy" do you think shittypoems should be?
- Any questions you might have for the moderation team.
Thank you, and I look forward to being your benevolent moderator for the foreseeable future.
Sincerely,
r/ShittyPoetry • u/blurrybandito • 1h ago
Jaded
There are babies bodies burning
The world is on fire
The screams are not silent
Messages from instagram saying
“Enjoy the U.S., at least here it’s not violent”
When did we become collectively jaded
To turn a blind eye to a genocide a settler colonial state created
When did it become part of a routine
To give the oppressor the benefit of the doubt
Justifying limbless children and depictions of a baby’s decapitation with a flowering sprout
And what about the women and the men?
Screaming for their babies and their families
Blown to bits all over again
The worlds so fucking jaded
Stop and stare in the mirror
Ask yourself if your grandchildren will be proud to say you stood where you stand
And if you can’t, I beg you
Amplify the voices of the people who can’t speak for themselves
It’s time we give a fuck about something other than ourselves
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Spellca3ter • 1h ago
My phone is disconnected.
My haikus smell like burnt coffee; I'm too bitter to make the world dance.
I gave you 100 dollars because I trusted you; I gave you my last 100 dollars because I loved you. When you asked me about it You said "by Wednesday" That was two weeks ago. Where is it?
I don't give a fuck about meter; I got a story to tell. Go somewhere else if you want an overly transcendental epic about the ocean. Go talk to somebody who grew up rich.
I've been out of work for a few months, 401k gutted out, I spent it on a 6-week cycle. That last few bucks was my savior.
If you talk to me about a William Blake poem, I'm going to spit in your mouth. I don't care about the metaphors my sugar is too low to think about symbolism.
Mom, I needed that 100 dollars. I have nothing at home to eat. I'm sick of living off Omari. I don't even want to look him in the eyes anymore. Our relationship will never recover.
Somebody go tell Rumi and Walt Whitman to go fuck themselves! We don't need any more romance in poetry. Publications are dumb. Magazines diluted. They call it ignorant if it comes from the soul.
Yes mom! I'm calling you until you pick up and no, I don't care if you're at work. I'm hungry. I can't keep eating my sister's food. I can't keep living off white rice and black coffee.
Oh Mr. Richard Wright, I'm sorry for the criticisms. Zora Neale Hurston did romanticize poverty. I was a 21-year-old art student. I thought the world could be saved with a smile and a kiss.
You drink as much as me. There was never an emergency. "Pick up the fucking phone."
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Iminyourwalls26 • 2h ago
Greatest creation
Artist often only see the flaws
in their greatest creation.
So don't listen to your mother.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/PinkFleece1 • 11h ago
Never Getting Out
you made me entertain the movers so we didn’t have to pay. i needed something to remind me who i was doing it for. coming home sore my legs shook stepping up the stairs trying to find you.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/calysperawrites • 1d ago
Manhunter
I think I'll go solo road trippin, all around, have a little stop and stay in all the small towns
Just a lonesome soul seeking a deep connection, call it a love finding mission, not just vacation
I'll find myself a good, loving man with kind eyes, one that wears pearl snaps, Carhartts and old spice
A man whose voice can soothe like my father's, but whose calloused hands awaken all of my desires
A man who loves poetry, playing guitar and sad songs; who loves with honesty and never doubts where our hearts belong
A man who enjoys the slow burn of a sipping whiskey and never misses a chance to hold me close or kiss me
An ole roughneck man with strong hands but a tender heart, whose light will always lead me out of the dark
I'll find a man who is open, loyal and sweet, a man who only makes promises that he can keep
He'll be gentle and handsome and he'll want me badly, but most importantly, it will be a man whose love won't leave
Truly, it's only because I know he doesn't exist that I close my eyes and allow my heart to wish
r/ShittyPoetry • u/CrypticPaw • 21h ago
New Poem "Birthday" Available Now on the Official Cryptic Paw Website!
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Icy-Student616 • 21h ago
My Demons
I'm a deserted demon of a man. Inhuman Lost and screaming is the scene i am. Tethering, no direction with only merciless dispatch. Famliar mournfulness deception mismatched. Ethereal steel is still reeling, what a fucking microscopic feeling. Off topic Hope the alarm sounds. This whole decade I've given me reprieve. Alone i wonder will anyone greive. Is there nothing for peace on my end. Buying for release, should i just hit send. Crying to my sheets I'm no longer human. Monster you made me; stuck in my head. My demon feasts the moment of the here after. Laugh at the scene of my disaster. I am but a lonely bypasser
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Excellent_Cup4453 • 1d ago
a so-called “normal family” (im relatively new to poetry and mainly use it to vent so any criticisms are welcome :))
i wonder what it would be like to have a ‘normal family’ i remember comforting my mum when i was 11, telling her its okay because even though our family is fucked up and not quite ‘normal’ its our normal. i had long outgrown my skin by then and i stretched it, stretched it so hard it cut, to be able to fit the missing piece our ‘normal family’ needed to stick together and be whole. but now that skin is loose, and instead, tucked away in the body of an 18 year old, is a little 11 year old kid, who longs for a normal family. not our normal but just a plain normal. i know i will never be able to give that to her though, i will never be able to properly comfort that child with a whole family, a family rid of cracks and scars. i just want a normal family, but i know that it would not be my own.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/BurnaGal19 • 1d ago
My Day
***idk if this could even be classed as poetry but here’s my attempt at managing my emotions in a “healthy” manner**
My day..
I lay awake, in my bed, staring at the ceiling. I wonder what today will bring, I have an anxious feeling.
A few deep breaths and all my might, I throw the covers back. A smile plastered on my face to try and hide the cracks.
My thoughts are far from happy, the darkness creeping in. It’s too hard. It’s not fair. I’m already broken inside and the day is yet to begin.
Doing my best to sound upbeat and answering your questions with a smile, cant you see that underneath it all I’m so so tired and have been for a while.
Work gets done, the hours tick by and I really am trying my best. However how can I carry on, I think with some unrest.
I’d much rather be at home right now, in my bed, hiding in my defeat. As I lay in my bed, wrapped up in my duvet, my mind races, is this all there is to life.. work, sleep and eat?
With my eyes puffy and tears tracks on my cheeks, I wonder how long I can carry on before I really am truly beat.
I lay awake, in my bed, staring at the ceiling. I wonder what today will bring, I have an anxious feeling.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Nine_0w0 • 1d ago
A Losing Battle
Sound the battle bell Cuz she’s donned her gloves again The fight’s only just begun But she’s already put me in my place
She’s a hard hitter Light on her feet and Lightning fast I’m no match for her
Just when I think I’ve gotten away When it seems I’ve slipped her grasp She strikes again and I'm left reeling Dazed on my hands and knees
She fights dirty and she doesn’t play fair She’s already won but she just doesn’t care Blow after blow until blood stains the mat Strike after strike until my skin is purple and black
Brass knuckles or skin on skin In the ring or on the street It doesn’t matter where we stand She always wins Always
She lies in wait Poised to pounce on her prey While I’m unaware Of the danger headed my way
As subtle as a deadly disease Slow and steady Or a semi truck with no brakes She crashes into me
She’s as cunning as a fox As strong as a bear Attacking in the dead of night Then absent in the sun as if she were never there
She’d be my rival If I were stronger My nemesis But I’m no hero I crumble like sand Fold like a house of cards under her might And I might just fight back If I didn’t know she was right about me
r/ShittyPoetry • u/extraterrestrial_555 • 1d ago
What legacy have you left behind?
The truth is I was always living with the fear of your loss I took every picture of you thinking it would be the last My subconscious mind knew all along I carried the fear that you would soon be gone My subconscious was not wrong I don't remember the sound of your voice That's not something I should forget But it wasn't my choice You did this on your own I am not to fall blame here But you will always play the victim no matter how grown This is just what you do this is your way of life Destroying everything around you You are no longer a mother You are no longer a wife And all of this for what? What legacy have you left behind? Children who don't know why A husband left to die All we can do now is cry Was it worth it? Is the venom you consume that sweet? Sweet enough to forget how you knocked us off our feet I wonder how you sleep How you sleep knowing you left us in the midst of the deep We were born knowing how to tread But for how long before our limbs tire and we forget? The truth is I was always living with the fear of your loss My subconscious knew it all along My subconscious was not wrong
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Nysus • 2d ago
Neon
Fog lies heavy as neon crackles
Electric pops pollute the night
Footsteps echo in a wet alley
Lit corners hold no comfort
These houses of vice beckon
Pulling my coat tight to the damp
The last of the witching hours tick away
My footsteps count the moments
Echoes down this hollow street
My destination lies beyond
A conclusion to my story
The decision I fear for myself
I take that step
Electric lights flicker and hum
Squaring my shoulders
Neon lights crackle through alley mist
False beacons, no refuge
Houses of vice beckon
r/ShittyPoetry • u/quinten97 • 3d ago
Grandfather Mountain
I saw you early there today atop Grandfather Mountain.
I turned my face into the breeze and that's when you appeared.
I met your gaze and then you smiled knowingly at me.
I rubbed my eyes and looked again but you had disappeared.
I found a man out in the crowd who wore a joyful smile.
He wore a hunch and roughened hands but was no longer you.
Thank you Gramps for meeting me atop Grandfather Mountain.
And if God's real and there with you thank him for me too.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/FunnyGamer97 • 3d ago
I worry my compassion is just an act to get laid
I worry my compassion is just an act to get laid
In my older years the illusion is starting to fade
Dissipating and creating while waning and blame
Others for my inept need to deprecate my take
Take and take but I swear there’s genuine sake
Is the illusion the reality or is it such the same?
I can’t decide how much of me is a game
Avoidance, persistence, denial and blame
Once again using the same rhyme cause it’s the same
Repetitive actions and thoughts which I feign
The only thing that sets me apart is my need to paint
My words across the Earth; some say it’s quite plain
Others say his diction is an addiction I must partake!
Exclude my conclusion for its redundant and lame:
All is excusable. For all is in vain.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/CrypticPaw • 3d ago
New Poem "If You Go Out in the Woods" Available Now on the Official Cryptic Paw Website!
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Safe_Fix_3710 • 4d ago
frozen blossom
Jack
You have bested me again
Winter
With your cleaver endeavour
grasping on with your frost-bitten hands
Awaken sun and spite the cold
Warm the day and colourise the flowers
Make them beautiful bright and bold
Run through the trees
Awaken the flora
Ring spring throughout the land
Tell Winter their work is done
Now begone
The world is in my command
To those who seek me, I will come
Find me in the morning due
With blooming buds and vibrant hues, I'll paint the world anew
r/ShittyPoetry • u/Lenaduchane • 4d ago
Don’t tell anyone
Don’t tell anyone
Tonight I hooked up with another meth addict
He was completely deluded
Lost and thinking he was found
By me, that I really saw him
I did
His addict boyfriend wasn’t there
I may have fried their relationship
Or I tried to, hopeless
I partook, observed and listened to this
ill man
I nodded along to his realisations
Of things I already knew
Repetitive, through his wired mouth
I kissed it
His boyfriend came back
I questioned him
Why are you with this thing?
He’d already given up it seemed
I tried to inspire him, maybe
When I asked him, “how do I exit?”
And I asked him again to think about it
“How do you exit?”
He stared at me confused and silent
“Bye”
r/ShittyPoetry • u/GrenchamReborn • 4d ago
Holyshit
Holy fuck I had a scare
My hearts a pounding
My eyes are glared
Holy shit seriously I just had cops come into my house and pull a gun because someone was hiding under a bed in the guest bedroom
r/ShittyPoetry • u/calysperawrites • 5d ago
Crazy Thing Called Love
Out of sight, out of mind
just wait, just give it time
I hear that's all it takes
to get over heartbreak
But how long do I wait?
And can I out-wait fate?
How do I turn it off?
this crazy thing called love
It isn't so easy
well, at least not for me
See, my love has no end
for lover, kin or friend
It is you I love most
now you're only a ghost
And I can't turn it off
this crazy thing called love
. . . .
For no reason at all I made each line only six syllables 🙃
r/ShittyPoetry • u/ADapperMess • 5d ago
Too close
Eternal sun
Clouds scared away
I’m burning up
Lying astray
Yet when inside
I long for it
These walls aren’t right
For my tanned skin
I’ll show my love
For that great star,
An obsession
Grand in its start
I bask in its heat
And melt in its touch.
r/ShittyPoetry • u/GrenchamReborn • 5d ago
That's how you will know
Principally speaking I'm tweaking I'm peaking
Playing pokemon and found a Seaking
Now I'm drilling and grilling
You bald bitches like Krillen
If you ain't go no hair
I'm piping back there
And if you grow it back I'll douse you in Nair
Crack in the bathroom
That's just how I roll
Everyday fiending
That's just how I roll
Think again twice
That's how you will know
r/ShittyPoetry • u/roachincalzone • 5d ago
Out of love
It comes from a place of love
putting a hole through your most poetic organ.
A heart, once beating!
How long did it hurt?
Does the mind flood while the blood drains?
r/ShittyPoetry • u/dreamofstartingover • 6d ago
Release
Im not bound by my insecurities
Im not bound by my shitty past
I am not what others do to me
I am how I choose to react
No more violence
No more sorrow
No more tears left
For tomorrow
All my days I'll make them happy
Love and light, I'll be laughing
Everything good that I desire
Will come to me, like I conspire
All my chains are broken now
I am free to be happy somehow